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#490 — 12.6.4: sentence fragments
- bug_id:
490
- creation_ts:
2012-07-09 14:05:00 -0700
- short_desc:
12.6.4: sentence fragments
- delta_ts:
2012-09-28 12:24:16 -0700
- product:
Draft for 6th Edition
- component:
editorial issue
- version:
Rev 9: July 8, 2012 Draft
- rep_platform:
All
- op_sys:
All
- bug_status:
RESOLVED
- resolution:
FIXED
- priority:
Normal
- bug_severity:
minor
- everconfirmed:
true
- reporter:
Michael Dyck
- assigned_to:
Allen Wirfs-Brock
- commentid:
1231
- comment_count:
0
- who:
Michael Dyck
- bug_when:
2012-07-09 14:05:46 -0700
In 12.6.4 "The for-in and for-of Statements",
under "Runtime Semantics: Labelled Evaluation",
we have:
"The abstract operation For In/Of Expression Evaluation
with arguments expr, iterationKind, and labelSet."
"The abstract operation For In/Of Body Evaluation
with arguments lhs, stmt, keys, lhsKind, and labelSet."
These are not complete sentences.
Change "with" to "is called with" or "takes".
Or, if you want to parallel 'For Body Evaluation',
append "is performed as follows".
- commentid:
1233
- comment_count:
1
- who:
Allen Wirfs-Brock
- bug_when:
2012-07-09 14:14:57 -0700
fixed in rev10 editor's draft
- commentid:
1696
- comment_count:
2
- who:
Allen Wirfs-Brock
- bug_when:
2012-09-28 12:24:16 -0700
fixed in rev10, Sept. 27 2012 draft